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Topic: In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. 

        
        Because of the fast development of the current world, going out to work is considered a crucial means for both parents. Some people do believe that the children in these types of families obtain many benefits while others might think that they receive less support from their lovely and warm families. However, I personally believe that children benefit a lot from their parents because of three main reasons. 

      Firstly, children are able to get independence when their parents do not stay with them. Actually, it is crucial when they start deciding at a very young age so that when they get older, they can trust themselves in making decisions. For example, one of my friends left his family to live in a pagoda in order to pursue his study at a lower-secondary school; by doing so, he felt much more confident than the other students in choosing a college major. Furthermore, children have self-solution whenever they encounter some issues as they get used to coping with these. 

      Secondly, children can get enough freedom due to the fact that all things are considered to do themselves without someone assisting them in doing any work. In fact, they do not hesitate to do their jobs since they do not depend on someone else. In addition, they can do whatever they wish without any reservation. 

      Finally, some people might feel that children are not fully supported by parents or guardians as a result of getting far away from their parents. However, they do not think about the children's future. Do your parents feed and stay with you forever? It is obvious that no one supports you whenever; therefore, they personally have to build themselves to get used to all circumstances. 

      In conclusion, children can acquire a range of benefits from the challenging globe when their parents go out to work. Thus, by going to the work of parents, children can receive independence and freedom which are extremely vital for their future. 

Written by GEP8 student, TOPNOTCH Education Academy 

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